the leaves of destiny

[torn iris]

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[opal thicket]

I love this concept! Good execution of it! Just one thing, the line breaks seem forced and is breaking the poem, although it seems the line breaks are just for the shape of the poem if you read it the way you break the lines it's messy.
But yeah loved tue poem as always

[pliant harbor]

I do appreciate this feedback! So for a typography style like this, the reading pauses solely follow my grammar rather than the line breaks, which works for me personally as I narrate my own pieces

[open bone]

Nicely done

[rocky phoenix]

i really like this, i might be overreaching here but the first stanza ties into the last beautifully, most of our poetry grows, stays, falls then is forgotten i really like that imagery.
also the second stanza is so satisfying to read

i might be reading this again in a day or two, good work!

[torn atlas]

"Forgot to throw in some imagery" a true poet. Connected to the art so much that it's the tool, we aren't

[sacred sand]

“mourning doves”
YES I LOVE

This is so real

[spring flume]

Hot damn.

Not even haikus
Can express alone the sheer
Willpower expressed.

[gusty estuary]

*Not even haikus

Can express alone the sheer

Willpower expressed.*

- Paoku

[mild dune]

What can i say? Ba-duum, you got it! Concept great, idea great, execution great, ending VERY great, love it.

Nothing more to say

[modest abyss]

Oooo another favourite! The typography is AWESOME, I really loved the second stanza and the last one was also so real

At times I feel like I write just for the sake of writing and then just forget it again, people forget even the poems they love

This was awesome

[lilac galleon]

THE WAY IT FALLS LIKE LEAVES

[simple matrix]

Love how the first two verses set the tone for the whole poem. Without them, the poem would be read much more sweet, thiughtful, mesningful, but those lines absolutely shatter all meaning. Great job.
WW.

[untold garnet]

Wonderful! @simple matrix has just pregressed to level 40!

[simple matrix]

OH LEVEL 40 WOWOWO