The Perfect Red Flag

[grand dirge]

Is purity a matter of restraint, or honesty? I challenge the idea that morality lies in boundaries, not intent. Because in the end, the only true difference between them, is who dares to admit what they are

@fallen marsh @sacred wind here you go

At first I had thought of writing it in a complicated manner
Like this one
https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1346938792883523645

Then gave up on that idea

[sacred wind]

I shall read when i ger home wifi is going away but i love the first stanza so far!

[fallen marsh]

As if a lie, well-dressed,
is not filthier than the truth, naked

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puuure fire

[grand dirge]

That's totally fine

[grand dirge]

I'll most probably rewrite it with a different approach like the Treatise of the Unsound
As this one questions traditional morality, it'd be a good framework for a poetic challenge

[sacred wind]

Impressive diction, and I enjoy the story overall! I love the lines “carries them like old woulds instead of secrets” and all the filth references within the poem, clever imagery!

[grand dirge]

Thanks man!

[night canopy]

This is so unbelievably amazing and you are such an amazing poet!

[sick estuary]

@night canopy is now following @grand dirge.

[grand dirge]

Thanks, I appreciate it!

[grand dirge]

@orchid geyser

[orchid geyser]

I knew you wrote amazing things!