Fate

[tropic fossil]

Fate

[lilac robin]

Its a really coherent draft! Which I think can be even more emphasised with the addition of new stanzas, and punctuation!

Definitely could use some more imagery to describe one's soulmate/what they do to brighten up your day!

Try to play with the word form~ itll make the poem more intriguing! :>

[tropic fossil]

Okk I always try to just let the words flow on the page before I change anything. 😂

Noted

[lilac robin]

Facts!