#Riding with Tides

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I ride with the tides,
A nomad of life,
A philosopher of love,
The poet of the wise.

For I see no animal,
So hard and cruel,
As thee say;
I see no danger,
So great, or from
the hell at bay.

My God is mine,
And thine is the other,
I may call him different,
But he is our father;
For he is and not,
He will be and was.

I do begrudge,
I do, too, sadden,
But I do accept,
Be it my grave,
flower-laden.

And I do love,
Once or twice,
For a moment or life,
Timely or more;
And I do doubt,
This world of the blind,
Who leave brevity and peace,
I ask them,
to blindness, abhor.

And I may not,
Be wise or sage,
But I do convey,
Their words. With age,
I, too, learn,
The fruits of the world,
The bible of life,
The mystics of love,
The Vedas of peace,
The Torah of Self,
The Quran of His.

And since I may not,
Be wise or sage,
I learn or leave,
or love or not
the words of the wise,
And as I do,
Shall I, again,
merely,
Ride with the Tides.

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eager bridge
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@exotic blade

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@opaque peak @spice swift

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@real jackal @mild ravine

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@scenic dove

exotic blade
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wohoo

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hi

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hry

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imma read

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yk my exam just got over and im FREE and now i'll be also posting poems and reading poems hehe

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i have one tmrw

exotic blade
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oh

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good luck twin

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you got this

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"A nomad of life" damn

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eager bridge
exotic blade
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woah

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bro

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the usage of words is Brilliant

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'thee'

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'thine'

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archaic

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and the ending

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it goes back to the starting flow

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it was so pacing too

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the structure

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the repetition in 6th stanza

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choice of word

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its good ngl

eager bridge
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i didn't realize i've written 6 stanzas

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lol

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thnx

eager bridge
# exotic blade archaic

i like to be archaic in my word choice, i tend to use words in a precise but not immediately understandable way like "he is and not,"

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imma share a table of old/middle eng in dm's wait

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sure

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mild ravine
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Interesting use of ceasuras and enjambments accompanied by natural and nautical imagery which enhances the poem well! The structure is intriguingly played with -- definitely eye-catching!

eager bridge
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"ceasuras" never heard of this thing

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@timber hearth