hii! you don't have to use the title Poetry Feedback, you can use your poem title in that blank, since you've already shared it in the poetry feedback channel :DDD
fading stream
hii! you don't have to use the title Poetry Feedback, you can use your poem title in that blank, since you've already shared it in the poetry feedback channel :DDD
i love the poem btw
great use of tonal shifts, irony and metaphors
verbiage and rhyming is well done too!
all in all pretty impressive
slim lotus
all in all pretty impressive
Thanks!