Boogie Man

[hallow shore]

Knock on the door,
Monster answers the knock,
Layer behind is bodies dropped,
Always knew love was dead to me,
I tried to pay Lucifer the fee but he couldn't understand me,
It useless when everything about you is confusing,
God laughs at me he finds my plight amusing,
The situation isn't even diffusing it feels like I'm losing the meaning,
What is meaning if you're not meeting it but meaningless,

I love but love doesn't love me,
Feels like I have a degree in loose teeth my mouth surprises even me,
Admiration for you is like water in the sea,
Comprehend the feeling I try to release,
Social ques don't fit with me there not something I do,
But when It comes to you I'm willing to chose something I'm not even if I have to drop,

[fringe gust]

hella internal rhymes

the first few got me worried and then it definitely picked up

the only line I’m a little confused on is the “degree in loose teeth” line

[hallow shore]

Means you good at lying

[fringe gust]

damn that’s a cool saying if so

also btw is the format supposed to look like this?

because I have a feeling discord just wrapped the longer lines around

[olive warren]

*because I have a

feeling discord just wrapped the

longer lines around*

- somyomy

[hallow shore]

They did

[fringe gust]

in which case I encourage screenshotting

[hallow shore]

It compresses for some reason

[fringe gust]

I learned that screenshotting it is way better

[hallow shore]

Ah, ok I'll remember

[fringe gust]

because tbh it kind of broke the flow of the poem for me at first because I interpreted the line breaks as pauses

until I realized it wasn’t supposed to be like that

[hallow shore]

Honestly just take it as you please,
I like my poems ect to be used as ones own interpretation

It gives creative thinking for yourself, you can always ask what I thought to tho

[hallow shore]

Thx for the feedback though, I'll keep it in mind!

[fringe gust]

np!

[hallow shore]

Would you mind rating my other poems?

[fringe gust]

sure thing just tag me

[hallow shore]

How do I do that?

[fringe gust]

@ my name on the posts of your other poems

in the comments

if it’s a bunch though I won’t be able to do them all

I’m on my very limited free time rn

[hallow shore]

You good

[ripe patio]

why are ur poems so nice to me, i gravitate to them

im not even actively searching for them 😭 i js click on poems that interest me and u happen to be the writer

[hallow shore]

Thank you so much😭