Vir - Compass | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

autumn mirage Feb 16, 2025, 11:54 AM

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@pearl island
@timber girder

autumn mirage Feb 17, 2025, 9:09 AM

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timber girder Feb 17, 2025, 1:30 PM

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Honestly that is really good man. So well written, gets the purpose of the poem out there so easily too

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👏

autumn mirage Feb 17, 2025, 1:31 PM

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thank you so much! :) yours is genuinely really good too
and yours deff has the more interesting line breaks/formatting

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do you see what I meant when I called them similar?

timber girder Feb 17, 2025, 1:42 PM

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Yeah I do thank you man ❤️‍🩹🫂

autumn mirage Feb 17, 2025, 1:51 PM

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great minds think alike 🫶

autumn mirage Feb 18, 2025, 11:23 PM

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@trail loom

trail loom Feb 18, 2025, 11:57 PM

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I love this one the most

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the first paragraph hits super well, especially those last two lines

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it feels like something a worn pirate would come up with when he decides to retire (in the best way possible)

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