#Whispers of Petals

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ashen dustBOT
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@acoustic yacht has sent a notification! - @zealous peak @cyan pelican @coarse crater @hot locust @cosmic bane @tame raft @dense oak @solar obsidian @solemn hill @crude reef @flat rune @drowsy lantern @simple leaf @ember sigil @inner vector @long saffron

cosmic bane
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I adore this poem rosey

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Absolutely adore it

acoustic yacht
runic bane
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Very creative concept, loved reading this ❤️

acoustic yacht
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@steel cape

steel cape
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SO BEAUTIFUL

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ROSEY UR TALENTED

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the formatting is really cool too

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enriches the reading experience

long saffron
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YOU DID PICTUREEEEE
AM PROUDNESS

acoustic yacht
runic bane
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Oh btw I LOVE THAT PICTURE

acoustic yacht
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@worldly sandal

worldly sandal
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Ooo!! I've read part of this one! I like it lots

acoustic yacht
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@uncut oyster when you ping random members they can take vengeance

uncut oyster
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damn

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I’m locked in poetry jail

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hold on

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the repitition in this one is mwah

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very well done (you probably know way more about poetry than me so I have no idea if any critiques can be made)

solar obsidian
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Aw this is pretty sweet, I like it, the format is also really nice with the flower and falling petals

hasty matrix
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I love this one! It puts a story to every single petal, rather than just saying he loves me and he loves me not.

I love how the flow went from a happy feeling all the way to not knowing the feeling anymore, with some slightly negative feeling in-between these.

The execution is too good and this is one of my favorite so far Noble_HeadPatts

acoustic yacht
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@pearl prawn

halcyon kraken
pearl prawn
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@acoustic yacht you stole my heart with a poem

acoustic yacht
acoustic yacht
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@hollow crystal

acoustic yacht
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@warm fjord

warm fjord
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"you have turned me into a galaxy, rather than a starless night"

i love the sudden outbursts of delusion in this poem (i relate), extremely well explained, and the imagery of the flower is beautiful, i really like it!!

crude reef
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Ok this is beautiful - you showcase the feeling of love that is unreachable in an amazing way. Love how the "he loves me"s are followed by compliments to the guy, and the feelings when you're with him. And the "he loves me not"s are instead realizing the incapability to achieve said love.

feedback edited because I'm dumb and cant count
VWW!

hollow crystal
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@acoustic yacht naww, one of the sweetest poem i‘ve read from you. Great idea implementing that „game“ and having this ping-pong version of it throughout the poem. sorry for taking so long…

crude reef
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Uh oh its gone