#Lot Slurries (Deus)

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steep solstice
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Snow falls again, but the ground won’t take it—
flakes just slosh on the blacktop,

The birds forgot to leave this year.
calls stretch farther than summer ever allowed;
threading chills, with something restless.

It smells like cigarettes and lofi—
a night muddled with black.
Streetlights flick away thoughts
before I reach the Bic,

and somehow—
it’s a full circle again

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pastel grove
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Lemme read this again, wait a min

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rotund marsh
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the birds really did forget this year, and I love it that you included this in your poem ❤️

steep solstice
covert roost
pliant cedar
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lemme jus put this in so i could check this out in a bit

pliant cedar
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what is "bic" here?

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i like the imagery the quiet peaceful walk but with this lament feeling subtly

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i like it

steep solstice
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Like the brand in America kinda

pliant cedar
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Okay damn

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Oka

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I like this emotion

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How do you like do this without using complex symbolism or imagery whar

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Like its so simple yet like the emotion in it is so clear

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Like the picture

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Im bad at reviews 💀i feel the emotions in a poem💀

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I jus rambled lol😭

steep solstice
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Hey thanks for taking an interest, I'm glad you were able to connect with it lol

pliant cedar
steep solstice
thorn pasture
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I love this poem, It feels like I can almost feel the cold air.
‘The birds forgot to leave this year’ I love this line, absolutely.
It also makes me kind of emotional in a way