green willow
In English we say,
You're mine
But in Poetry we say:
Your eyes, your smile
Your voice, your mind
It mingles perfectly and
Enigmatically with mine.
We're like a symphony
One only you can explain to me
One that only we hear
One that lives in you and me.
It's safe to say you own me
My Every breath
My Every kiss
My Every step
People say it's magical to be in love
But they never warned about it
The part where you and I
Want more than every second of it
Feel free to drop comments
zealous jolt
In English we say,
You're mine
But in Poetry we say:
Your eyes, your smile
Your...
the poem beautifully expresses ur feelings so good
zealous jolt
In English we say,
You're mine
But in Poetry we say:
Your eyes, your smile
Your...
just ending looks a bit of to me
its just a seggestion i m not the exp so its just my opinion
but the work is awesome
turbid hatch
In English we say,
You're mine
But in Poetry we say:
Your eyes, your smile
Your...
An ending couplet would fit it perfectly (imo). The rest of the poem flows well, love the metaphor of the symphony. Great work keep it up!
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