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#sonnet 3 | ➼ by Rain
young depotBOT
hardy marsh
Sonnet 1, I suppose (a collab): https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1288168828899037246
Sonnet 2: https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1307477366892920915
Do French sonnets count
hardy marsh
tepid harness
i wish our english class had POETRY too,
hardy marsh
this is cuz of the shakespeare sequence we're doing, we had to write shakespearean sonnets
viscid kite
this is cuz of the shakespeare sequence we're doing, we had to write shakespeare...
bro i'll read it just lmk how you got to lvl 50 in 5 days-
hardy marsh
bro i'll read it just lmk how you got to lvl 50 in 5 days-
i've actually been in the server since january last year, i've just had a pattern of leaving and returning
:>
viscid kite
i've actually been in the server since january last year, i've just had a patter...
OHH so the server gives you the old progress?
soo cool
tepid harness
i've actually been in the server since january last year, i've just had a patter...
bro joined when i did but i never saw Rainy
oh no 😭
tepid harness
this is cuz of the shakespeare sequence we're doing, we had to write shakespeare...
this sounds so funnn
gah
me wants
hmpffff
tho i did forget all meter I somewhat learned 😅
i can’t anyway now
north ridge
The snake the rake the spare the wraith BAHAHAHAHAHA I love this line so much
It tickles my brain so much
Birthmark on the shoulder of a thought is brutal but beautiful
An aching, beautifully gentle loathing
I love this poem, it feels like a rift between two family members, or a letter to a past self
Either way it's gorgeous
blister like a song 
I love the way you write I seriously can't get enough
hardy marsh
I love this poem, it feels like a rift between two family members, or a letter t...
the idea i had in mind was actually unrequited love
tawny sluiceBOT
hardy marsh
i want to say things to you that would be rejected by the automod
anyway
the point is that the speaker is actually addressing themselves
tawny sluiceBOT
hardy marsh
An aching, beautifully gentle loathing
self-loathing is definitely present, ofc
i can't write about romantic love without incorporating some self-loathing
the message behind the poem, ig, is "why are you so stupid for falling in love and condemning yourself to pain?"
bc the speaker thinks they are completely worthless and doesn't deserve love anyway
viscid kite
wow i loved ‘the snake, the rake, the spare, the wraith’
‘the birthmark on the shoulder of a thought is blotted out by a blue, intended breath’ so beautiful
it’s very beautifully written
fresh briar
Okay, for me this seems like an ode to an unpolished diamond covered by the rubble of perfumes and muck of bleeding faith.
Just a tortured person who is left to carry the husk to the finish line and never knew what race to participate in.
AND THE RHYMES DKDJDJSJS THE RHYMES TOO, INTERNAL ONES?! CONSONANT ONES?! KSKSKSKKSKS
I LOVE YOU MORE RAIN
fossil garden
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