juxtapositions

[tawny wasp]

gave me things to think about amazing

[shell bolt]

💛

[still shoal]

I always loved thinking in roundabout ways like this (which annoys most people to no end). I like your vocabulary and that cute little rhyme scheme. Not too superficial and not too deep - nice balance. It makes one think whether some peaceful things you liked aren't actually a little negative and some negatives have a silver lining so I like the dissonance. The first one was just downright funny. The one thing I'd suggest is giving the stanzas a sequence because they feel rather scattered (just an opinion btw, u don't necessarily have to do it) Overall I like this poem a lot and yes I'm rethinking most of my life choices. ✨