Simple and Dreamnt

[dry tundra]

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[glad pagoda]

Love the vocabulary, language and typo here! Great work!

[iron kernel]

Thanks Jane!

[hybrid gull]

Second to last stanza, and the structure changes are def interesting!
I do like this version a tad bit better I admit, but the theme ofc is already great

[iron kernel]

Thank you Zea! I added a lil more referenced

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[scenic cosmos]

yeah i need to jot these words down vocabulary is too rich

[iron kernel]

Wow~ Thanks Vindi! Looking forward to see your other poems