#Bittersweet.

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gritty lotus
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@white jay

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As asked

white jay
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I REMEMBER NOW

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I absolutely adore it

gritty lotus
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It was part of a longer poem haha, but this part I liked on its own

left sorrel
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bro wow

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i love how short poems are the ones which hit the most hard

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and the expanse of metaphor you can have in them

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this hits real hard ngl

gritty lotus
gritty lotus
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Like Sugar to a decaying tooth.

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Thank you for your input <3.

soft prawn
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ok this is a nice short poem but i feel that the title kinda juxtapose the poem a bit

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which is also interesting

gritty lotus
soft prawn
# gritty lotus How so?

cause like bittersweet is a mix of sadness and happiness by definition so are u saying this person makes u feel happy and sad but u still yearn for their presence or love in your life

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?

gritty lotus
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Exactly that

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You understood the poem more than I myself could put it

stiff tiger
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I love this 😭

gritty lotus
stiff tiger