th ats all sh e wro t e

[tribal shuttle]

The final message,
A blue tick burning bright,
In the darkness of my ignorance,
Oblivious child, sweet child.
Did your mother not teach you?
Did daddy forget to tie your shoes?

The balances were tilted,
Libra did scandel,
An extra lie in a dish somewhere,
Chalked up to her mistake,
Scandalous libra.
Foolish libra.

Old days,
Remorse felt real,
A shell of what was once,
A hollow empty take place,
The once iron hand of regret,
Metled into a pot of stew.
Drank by devils,
Chided by the children,
Who teased and cried
'thats all she wrote, that's all she wrote' .

-obloet
(s can del, sca ndel)

[tribal shuttle]

@dusty whale

[dusty whale]

Is it about breaking up?

Or trusting a person online too much?

So you ridicule yourself for how foolish you were to beleive them?

[tribal shuttle]

karma

But honestly it's a really ambiguous topic

I'm glad you managed to fit the theme into multiple interpretation

[dusty whale]

Whats libra here?

[tribal shuttle]

Karmic balance

It's how a single action can ruin the karmic bonds between two people

[dusty whale]

I see

[tribal shuttle]

'thats all she wrote' was meant to be a kinda sarcastic remark or a twisted tease about the karmic balance between two people. I guess it's really just a personal reflection of mine. Especially the first stanza, blue tick would mean like a irritation in an otherwise perfectly even black void. A stain on your karma. I hate owing stuff, so having my parents take care of me which is normally a very normal thing always feels so abnormal to me.

[dusty whale]

I see

[buoyant moon]

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