Mellifluous

[arctic fable]

Melodies seep through shells,
Each word is a golden stream, silken and saccharine.
Lullabies drip in nectarous tones,
Like sunlight bathing fields of jasmine blooms.
In your voice, I lose myself –
Flowers blooming in every note,
Lingering whispers sweeten the air,
Uttering warmth that soothes yet stirs,
Overflowing with a golden grace.
Underneath its spell, I am undone –
Soft, like honeyed rivers, your voice runs.

An acrostic poem, would like some feedback since I feel like I can't find a balance.

[unique siren]

"Lingering whispers sweeten the air" stands out amongst your other lines. As for balance, if you are looking for a more consistent rhythm, you could try to match the total line syllables!

[arctic fable]

thank youu! do you mean to have the same syllables in each line?

[unique siren]

Thats a possible alternative!!

For example, maybe

Melodies seep through silken shells -
each word streams gold saccharine,
lullabies drip their nectarous tones:
like sunlight bathing jasmine fields.
In its blooming voice, I lose myself -
lingering, and whispers stir the air,
uttering great warmth soothing;
overflowing with its golden grace.

[arctic fable]

ohhh okayy tysmm btww

[cosmic pecan]

Wonderful! @arctic fable has just pregressed to level 2!