#To You, N;

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To you, my first love, Naveen

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<@&1144090752457113794> Thank you all ✨

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BOOM!!!

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# slate meteor *To you, my first love, Naveen*

What I love from this poem is how deeply confessional it is!
I love that a lot - this is a confession poem after all, but it's still very good!

The diction is always something I look forward to in you,
and that is executed very well! The cynosure of my endear.

Imagery-wise, too! Alongside the given line? Stanza 3 is so good!
Stanza 2 is my favourite, however, but that doesn't take away my love!

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Isn't it past midnight for you?

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I don't feel like sleepin

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And I just miss someone

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Let's hit the bar 🤧

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Well yk, the protagonist of this poem... Is the reason I've started mz journey as a poet

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Yeahhhh, S6

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Lol

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qwq

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bye byeeeee

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SLEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

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SLEAY SLAY SLAY

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