#Letter to my Moon - ☆

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woeful mantle
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Celestial bodies cradle the dark,

as streams of color dart through the space.

A speck of light, a bright, tiny spark,

which, from afar, may seem out of place.

But close, where it is warm and bold,

there is a silence where stories are told.

Time is a concept, it is never too late

to gaze at the stars, to view love's weight.

It is never quiet,

but in actions and not words.

Love—the sky conveys it,

but you only see if you've learned.

The twinkling of stars is never too far,

actions of care portrayed as they are—

understanding love is never out of reach,

and to you,

sweet moon,

my heart is what i will teach.

🌙

polar pelican
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alright

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i like the rhyme scheme

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the concept is little cliche

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also lacks a little creativity

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got punchlines

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the message is nice

woeful mantle
woeful mantle
woeful mantle
polar pelican
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this is kinda the first one that ive judge that got punchline so good job

lusty locustBOT
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*this is kinda the

first one that ive judge that got

punchline so good job*

polar pelican
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overall a relatable, kinda catchy poem

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just lacks depths and creativity

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6/10