thorn leaf
A wandering of metaphor
A dancing pen that reaches far
A poem as a semaphore
A picture of a gleaming star
A soul that whispers in the air
"I strike within the wheels of fate;"
Who comes to find that wording fair
And tragedy assimilate
A feeler feeling out their rage
Yet without Hope they'll not Arrive
Thinker thinks of every stage
Who knew not that they were alive;
With poetry I came to see
That Feeling is the soul of me.
valid zephyrBOT
A wandering of metaphor
A dancing pen that reaches far
A poem as a semaphore
A p...
Wonderful! @thorn leaf has just pregressed to level 4!
thorn leaf
I didn't go line by line,
Instead I filled in lines
a a
c c
e e
And then went back to
b b
d d
f f
And worked on the parts I didn't quite have right, and then tied it up at the end with a GG that ties it together
hollow linden
A wandering of metaphor
A dancing pen that reaches far
A poem as a semaphore
A p...
nice one
definitely need more clarification
cool rhyme scheme
the meaning is way too deep
well not really
but the way you worded them with so much metaphors made it seem very deep
if its supposed to be an emotional one, try using less metaphors and clarify more of it
overall, a very creative, abstract poem
my judgment is a little harsh cuz im pointing out mistakes mostly
radiant whaleBOT
thorn leaf
It was a pretty strange puzzle for me. I threw out pentameter because that rhyme scheme just wasn't clicking. Then, I had to figure what it would be about! Had no clue and it ended up being about like four topics that are relevant to my week. Mostly, I was just sitting there forgetting I had already used a suffix for an earlier stanza
hollow linden
It was a pretty strange puzzle for me. I threw out pentameter because that rhyme...
i see
thorn leaf
The inspiration was from opening up to a friend about really getting into poetry and venting my disappointment and other negative feelings at the kind of hurtful way they said they weren't a poetry person.