reminds me of "why can I only write when I'm in pain?"
"because when something is there you can just point to it, but when it is there no more you need words to point to it" or something. I don't remember the exact dialogue lol
#The "Perfect" Poet.
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I agree with the idea
it may be a bit too bold and attacking for people though
because when you shoot it that way it looks a little extreme yk like yeah everyone who hasn't had pain is gonna be a bad poet
works though,
mmhmm, it does, and you're right
it's correct
sometimes when we have to appeal to audiences we gotta stay a bit mild
then again, depends on your purpose
yep yep it's nice I don't know if I would edit it, you may feel that way because you write on other, maybe deeper topics? i don't know. the thing you had to say here is said well. Then uh phrases like nothing but a shame feel a little incomplete because we don't generally use 'a' before shame unless there's more to the sentence. I think if you didn't focus too much on rhyming the couplets, you would've been able to fit in better words too
but this one I wouldn't edit
you could write a completely different one
in the middle?
like after the first 2 lines?
me as well but then whenever I wrote a poem focused around rhyming, I wasn't satisfied enough with it
most of my poems now end up being prose-like
I may upload some eventually
hmm, the edited order is better
that tomorrow line should come in the 3rd stanza only
first one
the one you posted here
I don't know, feels more conclusive than the second one
also the fact that you're basically predicting what a poet with no sorrow is going to be in the future
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