#this isn't just a poem, it's a rant, just comment on it, please.
dim lily
wooden sentinel
I wish the best for you
Letting go is never easy
I've been there a few times
Always remember to love yourself
dim lily
You shouldn’t have talked to Molly
wooden sentinel
wooden sentinel
Really mysteec
dim lily
My bad
karmic tiger
Well, this is heartfelt. But you can use more imagery and metaphors. To really make her see that you are crying your heart out.
you don't have to appreciate my thought. I usually used to block people and well i dive into games for few days to recover.
wooden sentinel
Interesting...
karmic tiger
well yeah then sorry but this isn't a poem.
wooden sentinel
A rant once in a while is nice
karmic tiger
this is a one crazy world.
wooden sentinel
Also another form of expression
karmic tiger
Also another form of expression
A rhyming rant is better
wooden sentinel
A rhyming rant is better
Good one. But I prefer free style
dim lily
All will be swell
karmic tiger
Good one. But I prefer free style
but still rhyme and internat rhyme especially with "T" sound get somewhat dynamite.
karmic tiger
Another fallen angel
I am sending him red bull, he will get new wings soon
faint frostBOT
Wonderful! @languid plaza has just pregressed to level 1!