#Pains and Whims

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fossil imp
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A collection of Poetry

hollow geyserBOT
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@fossil imp has sent a notification! - @dry lake @safe violet @somber yarrow @hollow anchor @faint rose @golden night @safe nest @floral arch @solid robin @fleet cliff @granite elbow @bleak vine @hasty rivet @drifting stirrup @shadow grove @undone tundra @tame badger @cloud sapphire @pulsar mirage

pulsar mirage
fossil imp
tame badger
tame badger
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I will see that

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It may take some time

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But I will surely see that.

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See the repetation that's emphasis not some worthless promise

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Lmao

tame badger
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Sometime I feel tempted to write my poem in a word file and name it as feedback and send it to yours, vardo, poetica, zeantier etc poem.

Where I can leverage people lmao

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I am not responsible for people using this idea...

fossil imp
solid robin
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Okay, alvy us spoiling me with all this content to sink my teeth into after exams lol.

tame badger
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I thought people just study before the 6 hour time period of the particular exam

solid robin
tame badger
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6 hr will do that

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well, i am a heretic and teaching perverted way of passing exam

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well good luck

solid robin
tame badger
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COFFEEEow you have 100 here. pfft. it look cool

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night before average college exam

dry lake
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this was absolutely amazing! yeah i definitely need to make my poetry collections here my

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this makes me want to do it, i think ill make like at least two collections from 2024 and one for 2025

fossil imp
fossil imp
undone tundra
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damn nice

solid robin
# fossil imp

Alvy, all I have to say for now is that, your poems literally have the most consistent motifs I have seen with flowery language to make it seem like I'm reading a classical poem.
And although I have been busy with life (exams and whatnot) I have read each one of these and I have absolutely loved them.
Your hold on English is the strongest and I'd say that right now, you are the most complete poet out of all the people I have seen here.
You know your self well and every verse carries the confidence of that.
Gale, wishing flag, elf amidst divinity, all of it is just...immaculate.
Thank you soo soo much for sharing this collection, and seeing my name in it is truly an honorNoizeLoves

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-# DON'T FORGET ME IF YOU EVER GET FAMOUS I LOVE U ALVY

normal phoenix
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thank you for sharing this with us

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seeing a collection of work this extensive is as intimate as seeing your blood, sweat, and tears

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it’s clear how much thought has gone into it

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i’ll be reading its contents on and off, but Black Sea of Stars might be my favorite

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the imagery present, its underlying themes, its wistful mysticism, etc just feel so cohesive and really resonate with me

keen wolf
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NO

fossil imp
fleet cliff
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yay alvy poetry collection!!

fossil imp
cloud sapphire
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Okay

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I will download this and read

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Give me a weak lol

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Aaaw its short

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Give me 3 days so

unborn vigil
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remind me to read this

fossil imp
bold falcon
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IVE FOUND A GEM, YAYYYYYYY

fossil imp
native pawn
# fossil imp

PLEASEEEE THIS IS AMAZINGG, IM SPEECHLESS, EVERY WORD AND EVERY LINE JUST LEAVES ME IN AWE, I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOO MUCHHH

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YOU DID

AMAZING

fossil imp
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Hope u like it :>

native pawn