#Maggie

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runic whale
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An older lady,
with wisdom unmatched
by myself
wandered up, unabashedly
rash rascal,
racing to the doorway,
I held open.

Thanks young man.

Graciousness in the
growth of generational
gaps. She taps into her charms,
explores but never harms her—

surroundings
sounding out sonic
sawdust shavings
with the lyricism
reminiscent of
sweeter songs.

I feel bad for you kids son

Heartfelt
nothing. The retreat of
rambling by the ridiculous
and now ominous warnings
by the clueless, yet clued in.

I don’t know
what i’d do
with myself
nowadays

She meant every word.

Have a good day pal

I’m wiping tears from my
eyes, my brain tricked
my body, to cry from
the heart, via art
of persuasion,
temptation
temptress,

she so often
is. This betrayal of
body and mind, mine to
consider, the lord’s to deliver.

What a hypocrite.

muted bloom
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Lineaaation🔥

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The alliteration and sibilance pleases my soul, I like it

runic whale
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@digital pulsar

runic whale
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surroundings

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environment

muted bloom
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Ooh?

runic whale
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Cause i feel like its something i havent explored as much

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yet its a very unique perspective

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to many others here

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Welcome suhnyee

rare orbit
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I really like this poem. The use of dialogue is really nice and helps get your point across! Also the last line hit hard for me, not sure why yet lol. Good work!

runic whale
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Especially as these little ways to break up sections of poems

rich ploverBOT
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*Especially as

these little ways to break up

sections of poems*

runic whale
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It feels like living there in the moment to me

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As where poetry can often feel very “after the fact”

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including that is not only engaging narratively, character wise

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etc

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But its just so like

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You’re here NOW

rare orbit
muted bloom
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I do like how personal the dialogue makes your poems feel

muted bloom
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Your poems feel like you're telling me a story of what actually happened, instead of trying to explain a concept in some elaborate way

runic whale
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exactly

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Narrative should be used to push meaning

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Dont push narrative through meaning

muted bloom
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surroundings sounding out sonic sawdust shavings with the lyricism reminiscent of sweeter songs

I came back because this is just so fricken cool

opaque dirgeBOT
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opaque dirgeBOT
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@muted bloom is now following @runic whale.

runic whale
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@wispy iris

exotic kelp
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Who is bro

hoary oasisBOT
rough merlinBOT
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:heart: @muted bloom has bookmarked this thread! :heart:

runic whale
exotic kelp
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That’s what I’m saying

runic whale
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@quasi crown in case you want to read another

rich ploverBOT
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*@grr these mods are

annoying. in case you want

to read another*

quasi crown
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the words flow together so well they come out of my mouth one after another

runic whale