hushed quail
This is my first time posting on the server, though I've been lurking for a few months now and have been reading and writing poetry for years. I would like as much feedback as possible about everything, the syntax, grammar, literary devices. This is a poem I wrote in the midst of a long depressive episode, that I tried to resolve for months, seeking help from friends, family, and professionals. I'm doing a lot better now though!!!
noble wagon
This is awesome, the rhyming and repetitive way sentences are written is really good.
hushed quail
This is awesome, the rhyming and repetitive way sentences are written is really ...
aww thank you, I think it's easier to read heavier topics when there's a lot of word play, rhythm, and rhyme
noble wagon
I couldn't agree more