#Change

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tardy willow
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This is brilliant

junior walrus
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Woah

stoic hinge
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how intelligent

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multiple meanings of the word "change"

woven pulsar
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Magnum Opus

stoic hinge
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and i love the change from "money-change" to "changing events"

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you've got quite the creative eye

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good way with words, wordplay, twisty meanins

woven pulsar
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Recognition, at last 🖤

stoic hinge
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exactly! and i can't think of a single one of your pieces that doesn't do that - fluctuating between various different scenes that shouldn't seem connected, but become associated thanks to your diction

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and just the general way you write

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you have this very specific voice

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blursob huh? lol

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of course

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i do enjoy your stuff

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always interesting to see what you come up with

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i love unique perspectives

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and fun, different ways to approach things

woven pulsar
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well this made my day

stoic hinge
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?

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me?

woven pulsar
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It's my best personality trait.

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we'll make it bigger some day

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and i dont think i've heard you say my name til now

stoic hinge
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-# oooh my bad

solemn fulcrum
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thanks

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this ones really nice

languid mirage
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Interesting flow for the entire poem!

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Nice rhythm!

solemn fulcrum
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lolol

hasty cypress
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This was a crazy read. I didn't know words could be manipulated to express emotion and meaning

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hasty cypress
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I sound like stupid but it kinda opened my mind up

solemn fulcrum
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its a monologue, I feel yeah

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Im usually not a fan of one word titles but this one really is effective

languid mirage
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Lovely wordplay, as mentioned by rain, this piece is powerful in terms of its ability to protray a single word as multiple instances. It really doesn encapsulate the idea of change.SaberSaysPretty

vestal bloom
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Clever!!!

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Of course haha, that's the way emotion plays out. You try to stay away from thinking about the insecurities but it just comes right back to haunt you when you try to evade it and never admit its prescence but its apparent to the world.
The value of change (in both ways) is one that the speaker cant accept but will have to..and the wordplay is just clever!

junior walrus
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Bond as a financial bond double meaning is intentional i assume? As in something that had the potential to be a long term investment was squandered as loose change. This is a very cohesive poem; it is very rich with meaning.