.. Yesterday Morning i woke up at Night .. | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

blissful widget Dec 24, 2024, 1:42 PM

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Yesterday Morning, I Woke at Night

The light never reached me,,
The dark held me tight.
Awake, but not alive—
Numb to the world,
Frozen in the echoes of what we lost.

Memories of that fight
Still linger, fresh, and raw...
GET OUT!!!
Let me beeeeee...
Desperate shouts crashing on deaf ears.

I try,
I try to suppress my tears—
To forget you,
To forget us.

Tell me!
Tell me!!
Tell me!!!
That these are all lies,
That you are still mine,
The dreams you sold were ours and ours alone.

Why did you do this?

You lifted me from the depths of hell,
Nurtured my broken heart with delicate lies,
Made me believe I was your salvation—
Only for me to realize I was just another
Broken puzzle piece
In your perfect world of manipulation.

You stand beside me, yet feel so distant.
Our memories—vanished in an instant.

I was one of your thousand clones,
A puppet lost in your hollow hands.
A fool who thought love
Was more than a game you played.

. Yesterday morning, I woke at night .
.. How do I forget the day before yesterday’s night? ..

Wretched con artist,
Petty liar!
Hey, cruel sadist!!
Those dreams were mine!!!
Blind, emotionless player,
Selling velvet lines,
Carving your lies deep into my skin.
Now I scream to strangers,
Telling them a story you will never hear.

(part 2 In comments)

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I dared her to look at me with open eyes,
To see the man she destroyed.
My poor form,
Wearing her betrayal like an open wound,
Bleeding with every thought of us.

And dare she did.

Those eyes where I once sought solace—
Now, they are my prison.
A polygon with infinite sides,
Each turn a blade, cutting too deep.
Those eyes—walls too steep.
I am trapped inside,
Scratching the surfaces,
Clinging to slippery slopes,
Clawing at the void where your promises once lived.

Restraining my chords,
Each note bending under the weight.
I played my part, but you won.
I lost it all in the silence of your final act.

The curtain fell—
But my soul never left the stage.

What I thought was love,
A circular, peaceful abode,
Is now just a hollow space—
A never-ending loop
Where I might never escape.

Your shadow lingers.
I cannot find my way back.
Bleeding in the maze of memories we built,
The wounds never stop.
The blood stains my hands,
Clings to my thoughts,
A poison I cannot shake off.

You walked away,
But your ghost remains.
A constant hum in the silence,
A reminder of how I gave myself
Only to be torn apart.

Tell me—
Was it all a lie?
Was I just another casualty in your game?

You knew the lines,
Played them so damn well.
But now I see—
You were never mine to keep.

Each word,
a blade.
Each promise,
a chain.
Each kiss,
a trap.
And every second with you—
A slow unraveling of what was never real.

My heart, twisted and frayed at the edges,
Until nothing remains but echoes of us.

Now I stand,
Empty and broken,
A reflection of your cruel handiwork.
I wear your betrayal,
Still bleeding,
Still burning,
Still living in the ruins you left behind.

Will all my mornings become nights.
Will I wake to darkness every day..
Trapped in the shadows of who we were?
Forever haunted by your ghost?
Will I ever find the light again...
Or will I always wake at night....

reef otter Dec 24, 2024, 1:58 PM

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i loved this poem man

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so simple

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so deep

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lovely man

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blissful widget Dec 24, 2024, 2:18 PM

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I wasn't aware of it.
I will remember it henceforth.

brave stirrup Dec 24, 2024, 2:19 PM

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blissful widget I wasn't aware of it. I will remember it henceforth.

No worries!

blissful widget Dec 24, 2024, 2:19 PM

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reef otter i loved this poem man

Thank you 🖤

reef otter Dec 26, 2024, 10:42 AM

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Woah this is stunning

blissful widget Dec 26, 2024, 10:42 AM

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Thank you 💔

reef otter Dec 26, 2024, 10:42 AM

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❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹

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Remember that life is beauty foo

blissful widget Dec 26, 2024, 10:43 AM

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When all 💔 become ♥️'s that day,
Life will truly become Beautiful ...

reef otter Dec 26, 2024, 10:43 AM

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Indeed

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When will the day arrive

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❤️‍🩹👌

blissful widget Dec 26, 2024, 10:43 AM

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I hope that day arrives with me with someone having an m in thier server name
Jk.

reef otter Dec 26, 2024, 10:44 AM

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LOL

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Beauty foo

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Too much beauty

blissful widget Dec 26, 2024, 10:44 AM

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Life is beauty foolm...

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I am nervous about it's quality

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Shall I tag other people or improve the poem first?

reef otter Dec 26, 2024, 10:45 AM

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It’s beautiful

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Don’t change a thing

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❤️‍🩹

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Okie, let's start tagging then---

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Lool

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😂

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He went afk cause i was annoying him lol

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Hahah

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blissful widget Yesterday Morning, I Woke at Night The light never reached me,, The dark held m...

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I love the emotions you've tried to convey here. It's just amazing!!!

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Life is beauty fool

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gaunt ice Dec 30, 2024, 3:42 AM

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The flow of the poem is very smooth, and reads well! Very interesting inagery throughout the poem as well :>

blissful widget Dec 30, 2024, 7:48 AM

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gaunt ice The flow of the poem is very smooth, and reads well! Very interesting inagery th...

Thank you 💜

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hearty crypt Dec 30, 2024, 2:54 PM

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omg this is so raw!! I love the concept

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one thing I really really like, is how blunt and straight forward this poem is. as if it came straight from the heart

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and it is very...chafed. I'd say, do you understand?

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it's beautiful because the intensity is nice. however, the more you'd write, the more your poem will flow. it's pretty!! overall, 7/10. well done

blissful widget Dec 30, 2024, 3:03 PM

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Thanks a lot 💜
Yes, I overdid some themes writing purely out of frustration,
I feel i repeated certain themes which could have been replaced by some diversity there.
Thank you 💚,
I hope i continue improving.
FYOLAI forever!!!

blissful widget Dec 31, 2024, 4:41 AM

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@slim notch

slim notch Dec 31, 2024, 4:46 AM

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blissful widget <@1278865170017419275>

This sounds like an experience you have went through. With how strongly the emotions are conveyed here. A lived experience more like. Which is very well done tbh

blissful widget Dec 31, 2024, 4:46 AM

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Thank you ♥️
Yes it was a personal experience.

blissful widget Jan 1, 2025, 10:15 AM

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@arctic pine

sleek creek Jan 2, 2025, 10:26 AM

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blissful widget I dared her to look at me with open eyes, To see the man she destroyed. My poor ...

Beautiful poem; I greatly enjoyed this one.

The curtain fell- / but my soul never left the stage
Is a beautiful line, amazingly encapsulating the feeling of this heartbreak - the love was an act, and the narrator is the one playing the fool.

I can't help but feel a certain connection between the lines
A polygon with infinite sides,
and
What I thought was love,/a circular, peaceful abode
as a polygon with infinite sides can be understood as a circle. So the callback to that is a nice juxtaposition on the circle, that cuts with each "corner" and the circle that is supposed to be love - perfect, eternal.

one minor critique I could suggest is that the poem could potentially be shorter? Not to say anything in it exactly was bad, but I feel as if a greater effect could be achieved if you only take a select few, hardest-hitting metaphors and use them in the poem, making it shorter and rapid-fire filled with emotions.

VWW.

rich terraceBOT Jan 2, 2025, 10:26 AM

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sleek creek Beautiful poem; I greatly enjoyed this one. *The curtain fell- / but my soul ne...

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blissful widget Jan 2, 2025, 10:42 AM

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sleek creek Beautiful poem; I greatly enjoyed this one. *The curtain fell- / but my soul ne...

Thanks a lot ♥️,
The breakdown was perfect and you perfectly captured my intent with the metaphors.
Yes, the impact could have been much stronger if condensed into the hardest hitting metaphors,
I do feel certain sections could have been tighter to hit for a more tighter emotional response,
I repeated certain themes writing purely off frustration which could have been cut short for a more hard hitting one.
I am very glad you enjoyed it,
Thank you ♥️

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sleek creek Jan 2, 2025, 11:03 AM

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blissful widget Thanks a lot ♥️, The breakdown was perfect and you perfectly captured my intent ...

Yea of course! You can always edit and revise when you got nothin else to work on

rich terraceBOT Jan 2, 2025, 11:03 AM

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sleek creek Yea of course! You can always edit and revise when you got nothin else to work o...

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blissful widget Jan 5, 2025, 4:50 PM

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@ripe echo

trim lantern Jan 7, 2025, 3:37 PM

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Wow 😭

blissful widget Jan 11, 2025, 6:28 AM

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full turret Jan 12, 2025, 3:41 AM

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I echo loafs sentiments

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With some banger lines

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Part two especially

blissful widget Jan 12, 2025, 3:43 AM

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full turret I echo loafs sentiments

Yes, Loaf provided an excellent review

blissful widget Jan 12, 2025, 3:44 AM

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full turret With some banger lines

True,
Will have to refine this one and tighten it

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