Our Love

[gilded steeple]

Hey, so this one of the poems I've written recently :))

[woeful yew]

Are they deceased? One last time, swollen, swelling, it's very pretty even if that's not the point but it feels like this might be darker than it seems. Maybe really messed up and dark. Or maybe my head is all messed up and dark I haven't read any of your poems before that I know of so I do not know if that sort of thing would be a reoccurring theme. Either way as a love poem that's about someone who's dead, someone who killed their lover, or something else like simply a kiss goodbye I love it

[gilded steeple]

Omg no they’re not Its not meant that way 😭😭😭😭 swollen as in from the kissing you know…

[woeful yew]

Yes I get it I'm so sorry

Its beautiful still and well written I love it and honestly I like it more as a less disturbing poem

[gilded steeple]

oh no worries at all!! I just found it funny how people can interpret poems so differently ^^ you're good