This Monarch's Chrysanthemum Terrace

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[dull mulch]

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[unique plinth]

that "till death do us apart" works well, but it still feels that it was forced. so i leave it up to you whether to keep it or not

still very good poem, well done

a remembrance of a loved one, almost raising them to divinity

👏 👏 👏

[dull mulch]

Oh its just there cause that was thw prompt 😛

[unique plinth]

ha lol

[sharp knot]

twin that is damn good

@dull mulch i also wrote something with this a beaitiufl structure

[sturdy jasper]

*@Alvester i

also wrote something with this

a beaitiufl structure*

- Nohi 𓍯𓂃🖋📜

[dull mulch]

Thank you!

[hollow portal]

I love this one ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

[icy wasp]

Holy gorgeousness

Blessed be

[dull mulch]

Thanks!!!

[dull mulch]

Blessed be the Chrysanthemum Tea, she had one brewed for His Majesty~

[south kindle]

This poem makes me think of longing for a lost connection, symbolised by the withered chrysanthemumn – a flower of longevity now decaying. Shared moments, like tea and music, are now echoes in dreams. The false moonlight and sleeping night emphasise the pervasiveness of this loss. Even after "three thousand", the speaker favors this dream-figure, bound until a death that may have already occurred in spirit. It reflects time's relentless flow and the enduring power of memory, both joyous and sorrowful. Indeed. Beautiful and melancholic, one would say.

[dull mulch]

Thanks!!!

That's very very accurate 😍😍

[south kindle]

This poem reminds me of this song

https://youtu.be/Y-vV0tW-k_E?si=nTs-NJBttfaR4pLo

[dull mulch]

Interesting!

I wrote it under the influence of chinese poems

[dull mulch]

@whole laurel

[dull mulch]

@sleek trench

[turbid robin]

now that title and poem wow