#Three Months Later | My Skin is Flower - TRS!
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@gray pewter hehe bop bop bop bop
Just from the visuals and the title this sounds like a feast
(And I still got all your other works to review sir
, may have to choose the ones I like and then go deep from there), 
Hahaha, pick a card, any card!
Bop bop bop
The imagery of the paper is very 🤩🤩🤩
Funnily enough, Alvy, I wrote this just after you posted our collab. :3
What a flex
Imma post sumn in #📜・poetry-discussion
"I love you every time you hurt me,
but I hurt you every time I love me;
and I’m sorry." very brilliant!
the emotional dept-UFF its damn good
the imagery is damn good
once i started reading i just kept going, slowly understanding each and every line
so beautifully written
❤️
it has some hints of instagram poetry. except this one is very good
"The way I dealt your cards" i'm not sure what this line means
but its a very good poem certainly
also lmk what is actually meant.

you mean you know or you don't?
@summer solstice is now following @worldly laurel.
ik the meaning of dealt but idk what is the relation b/w the cards or anythin
its like "the way i distribute your cards" idk what does that mean
the use of "cards" implies strategy to me, like it doesn't give good vibes. it's like she is plotting against him. trying to get rid of him
that make sense now