#The Pluto in Us

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To those of us who are like Pluto:

We regard the near skies as a haven -
to satisfy the ambition which has graven.
And, epithets shall not yoke us to earth,
And, gravity's reprieve chosen by mirth.

                                                       *~Dwarf~*

Steps are made for soaring into the sky,
our will, beared for each ascend to defy -
submission to only: our moons and a sun
that orbits the successes we have won.
hum
hum
hum

     *thud*                                        *~Planet~*

Yet, when our frail core has corroded -
we fall, undone by the blue comet, eroded;
down the steps, we crash, 'defying gravity' -
harshly: we exhaust this world's depravity.
thump
thump
thump
~134340~

May my oppressed grandeur awaken -
so, these people, wicked or saintly,
shall watch my finale in death -
for I have promised:
My Supernova!
Boom

“Let us rest. Let us rest.. Let us rest..."

                       *Silence*

           "Then, we are free."

                      *Silence*
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glass oxide
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edgy zenith
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W

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north hill
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this is beautiful omg

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i love this sm HELP??

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zealous remnant
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The conclusion is grandiose, where the conjunction of pleading lies in the sidereal symbols you have enunciated - this is something that genuinely cannot be configured as a hindrance, but a beautiful composition.

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Honestly, it's very difficult to put this into technical words, as his poetry speaks for itself. It makes a mark and also makes us go beyond the physical universe. This is something that so many excellent poets do.

glass oxide
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Thanks Marco~

late marsh
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The Pluto of Us

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sharp pivot
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Beautifully written
Unique poem 🥹

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The Pluto in Us

opaque charm
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i already readed this one in contest submission. well i love these kind of poems. the shape speaks for itself. it's a good one well your poems are always fun to read.
awesome one alvyy catgg

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lean forge
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you seem to have written an experimental novel it seems, i can look for a publisher as eccentric as the poem is

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great one

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it is more of a script for 2001: a space oddessy than a sci-fi poem, in my head

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but it a very playful poem, itching to the form and structure and conventions of poetry. conventions i like to see and like to follow

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im gona follow ppls i didnt knew abt this dan

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damn

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steel elm
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It captures the tension between striving for greatness and the inevitable fall that comes with it.

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The progression from ambition to downfall, and the eventual acceptance of rest, feels deeply poignant – it's a reflection of our own moments of defiance, vulnerability, and introspection.

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This poem actually feels like a delicate dance between hope and resignation, and this poem captures it with both grace and raw emotion.

fallow nexus
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onomatopoeia be rollin off the dome

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lovelovelovelovelove

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vague swan
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Where has this been- where have i been my name is literally one of Pluto's moon!!!

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This is amazing mate

glass oxide
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Cool~ that your name is one of plutos moons DragonEnjoyingShow

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