#Blue - POEM TURNED SONG

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deep marsh
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Blue

[VERSE 1]

You knew me from my veins to my cold heart
Now I’ve changed
Looks like I’ll need a restart
And I know you despise me, you withdrew
Your painting’s ruined and you’re all out of blue
You lost me, then lost some weight, just a part of you
Come clean, flee the scene, that’s all that’s left to do
Is it easier to breathe?
Is it easier to see,
See rewinds of the times you’d put pressure on my spine
And I’d break all of my bones if you’d let me be your home.

[CHORUS] (will repeat twice)

Gutted my flesh from the inside and out.
Successful operation, go ahead and take a bow.
You’re different now, but I’ll still see you through. You’re all realigned, but nothing’s fxxxing new.
Another state of mind, you’re removing all your tattoos.
Look at me, it’s true.
We both get to lose.
I’m still bitter blue,
And you’re not new.

[VERSE 2]

I’ll say sorry for the hundredth time, I asked too much. Sparkling wine, wasn’t real, but how it felt as such. Bubbles dissipated, all because I contemplated.
Was it was me you hated?
A week’s time, wasn’t much, but you destroyed the line.
If I had said I loved you back, would you still wanna be mine?
Isit easier to breathe?
Is it easier to see,
See rewinds of the times you’d put pressure on my spine
And I’d break all of my bones just to prove it’s not a joke.

[BRIDGE]

Heard you’ve had misfortune
How are things going up in rural Oregon?
I can feel you breathing down my neck like something foreign
The necklace that you gave me, sitting under oak trees. I’m a blizzard, you’re a light breeze
Your pond is nothing next to my sea
Said there’s a lock on my heart
Well aren’t you smart?
My blood has hit the air, it’s red
Not scared of what’s ahead
I’ll make a masterpiece
Now that I’m at peace
I can make it true
I’ll be fxxxing rude
It’s all thanks to you

[OUTRO]
Your paintings ruined
Now I’m no longer blue

silk hinge
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Damnn

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Ughh🔥

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Ouch ouch

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(🫀)

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YOUR POND IS NOTHING NEXT TO MY SEA 🗣🔥

deep marsh
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😭😭😭🙏🙏

silk hinge
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Oak trees… real

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Sitting under trees #real

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Genuinely this is really good

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It feels like a wound

deep marsh
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thank uuu i might record it soon

silk hinge
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I wanna read more of your work - the feelings are so relatable atm. You capture them so well

deep marsh
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I feel like the lyrics r confusing

silk hinge
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No their not

deep marsh
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i might make them more concise 😭😭

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silk hinge
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W level up 😂

deep marsh
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i know i’ve been waiting for this moment

silk hinge
deep marsh
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we shall seee

silk hinge
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Share more of your writing 👌

deep marsh
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THATS ALL THERE IS🔥