reindeer-mass | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

vagrant isle Dec 12, 2024, 7:12 AM

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@nimble reef

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[apologies for the huge delay my baddd-]

nimble reef Dec 12, 2024, 7:23 AM

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vagrant isle

Yeah, this is totally fine.

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Love the narrative.

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The barz

vagrant isle Dec 12, 2024, 7:23 AM

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thank u so muchhh!!

nimble reef Dec 12, 2024, 7:23 AM

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I ain't Tupac, but damn.

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You pushin.

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Revenge is like the sweetest joy.

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Keep writing, man!
Refine those skills that'll define your quill, and in time, you will look back at these lines as pillars in your history.

vagrant isle Dec 12, 2024, 7:25 AM

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Thanks a lot- forsure forsuree

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@viscid moth

[You're in this piece- go find your username- (and read it hehe)]

viscid moth Dec 12, 2024, 6:56 PM

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vagrant isle --- <@690621644913377381> [You're in this piece- go find your username- (and ...

RAHH THIS BANGS 😭 🙏!!!! BARSSS! I am a little upset you didn’t mention Atlas in your lines about the world being on your shoulder and you being Superman “CLARK KENT!”. It would’ve fit into the story, been a metaphor, AND fit the rhyme scheme. It could’ve easily been put in there like “cus I’m liftin’ this load/ even tho it feels like the-/ whole worlds on my shoulder-/ Am I the…/ (Superman!)-/ like I’m Clark Kent-/ or maybe atlas/ but how can I last this-/-when I can’t feel a thing-“
(This might be bad tho as it’s hard to read pauses or extended words for songs 😭 so I don’t know exactly how you’d read those parts)
THIS IS STILL FIRE THO
(OH AND I SAW MY NAME 😼)

vagrant isle Dec 12, 2024, 10:25 PM

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viscid moth RAHH THIS BANGS 😭 🙏!!!! BARSSS! I am a little upset you didn’t mention Atlas i...

Completely Valid Critique- 💯 Atlas would have fit so well- I should have written it into my rhymes- my apologies- thank you so muchh- for taking the time to read thisss- You da best RoadRage!

vagrant isle Dec 13, 2024, 3:13 AM

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@long epoch

long epoch Dec 13, 2024, 3:13 AM

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Hello

vagrant isle Dec 13, 2024, 3:14 AM

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ya- chk it

long epoch Dec 13, 2024, 3:14 AM

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Click what?

vagrant isle Dec 13, 2024, 3:17 AM

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long epoch Click what?

here

long epoch Dec 13, 2024, 3:17 AM

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Finally

brazen tigerBOT Dec 13, 2024, 3:17 AM

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long epoch Finally

Wonderful! @long epoch has just pregressed to level 1!

vagrant isle Dec 13, 2024, 3:17 AM

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dawg as I said

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I just tagged you here

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cus u wanted to see an example rt- and im showin

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that's it- if ur ready- back to DM

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and send ur stanza there

vagrant isle Dec 13, 2024, 3:18 AM

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brazen tiger Wonderful! <@570911481244286976> has just pregressed to **level 1**!

oh- u just joined..

long epoch Dec 13, 2024, 3:18 AM

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I love that you called it my stanza

vagrant isle Dec 13, 2024, 3:19 AM

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long epoch I love that you called it my stanza

ofc it's yours- your gonna post it anyways no worries- I don't post collabs-

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just tag me in the post if u do

shut drift Dec 15, 2024, 11:40 AM

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Yea I saw my name! I didn't understand why you mentioned my name in your poem, is there any reason behind it? 🙃

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Yea yea! I read that! No issues lol
And I was in your mind 🙃 lol

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