Turmoil of Serenity

[agile shadow]

I like how the syntax and enjambment tumbles the poem forward as if "hours
/ unhurriedly tick by." Really nice piece.

[tall zephyr]

thanks a lot!!

[south dome]

this poem is an accurate representation of depression, and i especially love the stanza "Petals grow on my skin, Stalk bursts out of my eyes, Roots replace my feet, The anchor of travel dies." ❤️❤️❤️

[thorny oak]

You expressed your feelings in a way that let others feel exactly how you feel. I love this 💗💗💗

[tall zephyr]

thank you so so much<333 its my favorite too haha

[tall zephyr]

thank you!! glad you enjoyed it:))