Embroidered Memories -Hydrae

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@glass onyx @sturdy relic @lime hinge @jade stag

@unborn mulch

@marsh gale @lavish kiln @mild minnow @rocky hull

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@idle stag

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Skibidi

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@fading gull

[rocky hull]

This poem is very yummy

[sturdy relic]

Sigma Sigma boi

[mild minnow]

Sigma boi sigma boi

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@thorn sentinel

@iron agate

[sturdy relic]

Russian words

[mild minnow]

Sigma sigma boi 🗿

[lime hinge]

im gonna smack you both

[sturdy relic]

😭😭😭

[iron agate]

I like the metaphors you have used such as embroidery , warm sweater , meadow , circus it's all amazing.
The pain and melancholy this poem shows using dried flowers , stitch on heart is incredible. I kinda feel the self blame in this poem too. I love how you end up acknowledging that these memories are something unpicked and that you'll end up hurting yourself.
Well done hydrae

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Do that and review the poem

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Thanks brownie appreciate the comment

@thorn sentinel

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@hardy frigate

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it is also beautiful and painful, the whole poems hits so hard, hope u r doing good sis

memories of love, those precious memories, trying to forget them leads to so much pain, memories like threads, tbh, the poem is relatable,

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I'm ok.

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Thanks Dragon

[thorn sentinel]

Its that yeh? I will check it

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Hmm

[thorn sentinel]

Yeah good wow
I love the "our circus consisted of u were the judge"
Makes me feel out of control

Thats só amazing damn

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Thank you Rico 🫶

[thorn sentinel]

Np, keep writing

[vast swift]

Great one! It pictures the memory lane very beautifully. I would recommend adding some semicolons, and colons: they really beautify your poems, and provides clue to the reader more than anything else.

Like:

The meadow we planted together,
With flowers blooming cheerily. 
Is now, a shell of what it was;
Dried flowers crowning it

Tho this could be subjective as best

[lime hinge]

you didnt review any of mine

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I'll do yours after my exams end (for sure) 🫠

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This looks lovely. I'll have a look. Thank you (I'm bad at punctuations usually) so your review is pretty helpful.

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@gilded venture

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Embroidered Memories -Hydrae

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@minor nexus

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@tacit wave

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damnnn it should have 8 stars

it looked like taylor swift type lyrics to me