This is some of my poem

[scarlet salmon]

•Eighteen•

I'm turning into a prepossessing creature.

In a month full of lies

And the moon shines brightly at midnighty.

My past is left behind; my present keeps moving on.

While my future is waiting on the other side,

(This is the first poem that I wrote and I)
don't think this is a poem .

°My Deer°

What is this happening inside my heart?
It pumps faster when I think of you.
Even though you're not mine in the first place
Should I say it or keep it?
Should I show it or throw it?
The things that I hide in me
Well, to be honest
I was praying for this to happen.
Because I want to know what it is like.
To be hit by a cupid
But now I regret it.
And now I want to make a new wish.
I wish we didn't meet.
I wish I didn't see you.
I wish I didn't know
And I will pray to Goddess Aphrodite.
That her son will spare me
On the day that I saw you.
Please let me forget you.
So may I find peace in my heart.

**This is the poem that I think is better of all my poem . Because when I make this I've was inspired on my crush that time and it turn out good. And when I read this poem I feel ashamed of it but now it's is gone . And I've I don't have motivation or inspiration on making something good

[hollow olive]

BOTH OF THESE ARE AMAZING WHAT?? I love these sm 😭

[scarlet salmon]

Really thank you. By the way do you think the first one is a poem ? Actually I thought is not .

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[hollow olive]

i would say it’s a poem! There are many styles of writing.

[scarlet salmon]

Ok thank you, so what is the style of writing is the first one ?

@hollow olive actually the reason I'm not confident with my work is I thought making poetry should had the right of rhyme, tone and anything that makes the poem good like the school thought us . Do you think my poem has a sense of that ?

[hollow olive]

that’s not all that poetry is! I’m not an expert, but I use poetry to get something out of my head and on a page. Don’t put pressure on yourself to make sure that your poem rhymes, it’s art, there’s no one way to write. It’s something I’ve had to accept too, but poetry is really suppossed to be an outlet.

[scarlet salmon]

Thank you for saying that ☺️

[hollow olive]

ofc!

[scarlet salmon]

By the way last question . To write a peom it ok to use some hehehehe ai to correct grammar like grammarly . I've kinda feel guilty on it and also google to find some word that I want to describe . Actually I want to improve myself on not using those kind of thing , it also the reason why I'm doubting myself capabilities as a writer because I've been using does things.. 🥲

[hollow olive]

I personally don’t use ai, as grammar rules really don’t apply to poetry, but I don’t see a problem with it! That’s more of an opinionated question, though.

[mighty cairn]

Wonderful! @hollow olive has just pregressed to level 1!

[scarlet salmon]

Ok thank you for the advice , I guess I should improve myself not on using it ,

@hollow olive can I ask ? How do you make your poem ? If that ok with you to share it.

[hollow olive]

i just sit down, turn music on, and write 🤷

[scarlet salmon]

That's cool , I guess . There are so many things that I have to improve .

Ohh by the way there is a only two poem that I didn't use a help by a Grammar checker and google . The first one is the poem that I posted which the second one, because I was so inspired that time so the Olympians gods just pop out , out of nowhere in my mind . And the number two is here in my storage and I don't know if you will like it.

Thank you for your advice .