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slim bluff
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@tired ridge

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@mystic shuttle

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@covert otter

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@spark wave

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@cinder basin

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@idle dove

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@sand reef

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@bold current

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@wintry plaza

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@stone ferry

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@quiet patio

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@swift pike

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@proper pagoda

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@limber raft

slim bluff
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well

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here it is

slim bluff
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@rocky glade

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Try this

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Best of best

rocky glade
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I would not stand for that

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slim bluff
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I just added it there to keep it. I will remove that

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Focus on the poem

rocky glade
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Whatever. Sure.

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Ok, hard to follow.

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Who is taking

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And when are they talking?

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The premise is gotten, but the concept and execution is confusing.

slim bluff
rocky glade
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Hmmm, apart the structure, the story is a tad bit confusing too

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This can be improved a great deal.

slim bluff
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i have been ridiculed by 6 poet

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i will get back at them, 5 are dead, 1 is alive

slim bluff
slim bluff
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@hard crystal

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you see they are all pieces, i am writeiing all piece first, then i will clear the puzle,

hard crystal