#"Imperfect Devotion"

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knotty blade
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@cold hearth

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@willow radish

cold hearth
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will read it asap

cold hearth
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This is a beautiful representation of love. You do not love somebody only for their bright side everybody sees. You also learn them to their worse and still choose to love them, not caring of what others think.

I loved the line “She was perfection, every man’s dream, but to her, he was the lifeline unseen”.

Short but beautifully written.
To my point of view maybe you could have added a few rhymes to the first stanza, but it’s not a bad work. Good job man, props to you

knotty blade