#When someone loves life too much

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ivory sedge
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When someone loves
life too much,
they are eager to find
new ends and beginnigs,
to go away, but always be back.

When someone loves
life too much,
recklessness crosses their paths,
to be filled with emotions,
however feel none.

Path to be that person,
hard is weak word,
flames on that path
are burning ice,
to be hurt, to feel pain.

However when someone
loves life too much,
they are sun above your black clouds,
rainbow at the end of rain,
to be sentimental, to relate to them.

But all you have to do
is let the snow melt on your hands,
feel the urge than stop,
for years and years,
be the sun that always shines,
even in the darkest of the nights.

Because all you have to do
is wait.

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When someone loves life too much

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@sharp notch @desert lava @pseudo fractal @lavish sapphire @dusty nacelle

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@heavy beacon @finite nacelle @granite spruce @wraith wyvern @foggy frigate

meager elbow
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this is honestly beautiful

ivory sedge
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i edited it

ivory sedge
dusty nacelle
ivory sedge
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first happy poem after months and months😭🙏

dusty nacelle
lavish sapphire
finite nacelle
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I think its a nice poem with good flow! As usual, my comments would always be to re-emphasise punctuation and certain grammatical errors! Overall, your piece is very introspective and intriguing! I like it! heartpotat

ivory sedge
desert lava
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Always happy to be reminded that optimism is not a weakness

ivory sedge