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solid venture Nov 25, 2024, 9:42 PM

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@worthy rivet

worthy rivet Nov 26, 2024, 12:39 AM

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Shrooms are a fun time, jk! Love contemplative pieces!! Using arduous and ardently in the same sentence is a bit repetitive just a personal pet peeve, the writing tho is otherwise super clean. The formatting of this one and flow are super different. The second stanza is my favorite, hit different for some reason.

solid venture Nov 26, 2024, 6:55 AM

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@sly agate

sly agate Nov 26, 2024, 6:57 AM

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Ouuuhhh, love the first stanza!!! And deeply introspective
I love using colloquial language in poems, and you did a good job at it
NoizeLoves

solid venture Nov 26, 2024, 12:15 PM

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🍿 I think you posted in a diff place !

worthy rivet Nov 26, 2024, 12:16 PM

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HAHHAHAHAHA

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I'm so sorry

solid venture Nov 26, 2024, 12:17 PM

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worthy rivet I'm so sorry

its okay 😄

solid venture Nov 26, 2024, 12:18 PM

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worthy rivet Shrooms are a fun time, jk! Love contemplative pieces!! Using arduous and ardent...

i love shrooms tbh

worthy rivet Nov 26, 2024, 12:18 PM

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Me too

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joekek

solid venture Nov 28, 2024, 6:57 AM

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❤️

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