#Lake of sun
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'horses are riding the soldiers' is interesting - curious as to what you mean?
The soldiers are dead, horses are either running on them
sorry if i am just too slow to understand... but in what scenario is the speaker in?
Its war, the ground is bloody (hence the color of dawn and why flowers are turning rose a flower thats red) and i didnt specify the speakers position
Ahhhh that makes much more sense. Bro thats such a good poem. I love it fr.