The Weight of Stars

[surreal laurel]

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The Weight of Stars

[wheat latch]

Poignant and beautiful. This is what I want Dr. John Asquith to be, to use modernist and tech-inspired similes to draw the beauty of this world in an exacting degree. The fact that the man gently shifted from embracing the loss of her daughter to be distracted again by his work is beautiful, but yet fleeting, as if when he's lonesome again he'll surely embrace the stardust that was his beloved. This tale of being lost, both in emotion and automaton, is perhaps more descriptive of your background that you ever know. And the closing line, Ya Rabb, it's a home run

Write more, and terima kasih; dhanyavaad ❤️

[surreal laurel]

https://tenor.com/view/keyaan-john-wick-keanu-reeves-gif-16780356647091665393

[knotty forum]

So, I....just felt like I read a short story, in the most beautiful way what??
"You taught me to defy gravity...let's use them to defy this too"
Urgh, you made physics jargon sound melancholy and bereft, as if its a character in its own right, what
I absolutely love this...it's a poem I will remember for a long...long...time
-# also sir, spare me some of your money pls

[surreal laurel]

Thank you sooo much dear. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. 😊

[knotty forum]

I'm glad that you are glad lol. I can see your poetry branching in a more...narrative style rather than description one, and I'm excited to see where it goes lol