#The Joke Stays With Me

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still isle
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There aren't words enough to express how much I love this.

topaz root
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This is a masterpiece of absurdism and inherently human. No matter how meaningless the world seems at times - You would be a greater fool not to lend it meaning yourself.

unkempt fog
dry matrix
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Wow. This is fantastic!

unkempt fog
silver igloo
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I am beyond impressed and flabbergasted what, I deeply deeply deeply love this...
-# also, an ionizer design?! 120k?! R u kidding me?!
-# but yes, all of this an endless farce

fathom plank
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In stanza 2 you should write out ‘and’ instead of using ‘&’ as it helps the reader continue reading in poetic flow

I really like this poem. The very nature that we are all the “mice in a maze we built for ourselves.”
This is absolutely brilliant

violet ferry
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I actually really like this a lot, the idea is so interesting and unique

We drown in answers
to questions we are too proud to ask
we light candles in the wind
& curse the darkness
when they go out

I love this stanza

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This is really good, amazing job

unkempt fog
still isle
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This is hauntingly beautiful

still isle
unkempt fog