#How does hell sounds?

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A Melody...
it echoes in my soul.
It is yours, that you are part of my soul, and you have seen hell more than once.

You peered into the souls of those who screamed at you to understand why, you entered their emptiness, but you came out destroyed

You who learned to hate, but without your wanting to, because the world only knew how to treat you that way.

But then I came along, and showed you love for the first time! But you didn't recognize it...

You brought me so into your hell, and I came out different

Finally you took your emotions and poured them out on this piano.

You play this wonderful melody, enchanting me, making me lose my breath.
I remain helpless before your soul.

Every note tells about you, my crying instead, reminds you that I love you, but love you never understood.

Finally you left me alone with my crying, and as you leave me, you add to your score my note that now, is part of your hell, defining what you are, what we were...and it will be forever part of our little hell...

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steel plank
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oh

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this new?

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steel plank
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theme is also good

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you really think so?

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this actually capture a moment that happened

steel plank
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thats why i love it ig

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My ex was playing piano in front of my and i started to cry

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I was thinking about all the things she went true and the way she was playing the piano was emotional, it was evident that she always put her souls in the notes she plays

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after a month she left me

and i think she added a note for me, one that will last forever

steel plank
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(not really it is just a metaphor)

steel plank
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i hope you get better

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idk why i cried tho

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It was automatic

steel plank
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its alright to cry

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@north zephyr

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@vague ember

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@mental hawk

mental hawk
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Really good! This reminds me of a story type piece by another poet on here called melody, ill try and find it if i can

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mental hawk
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Thats so weird considering lol

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mental hawk
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No rush, just sharing cause i felt it was interesting

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And its of course not a 1 to 1

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@hallow spear

hallow spear
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hallow spear
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# hallow spear not really

i can explain it to you

it's about my ex
she used to play piano
so i wrote this thinking about that time she was playing the piano in front of me and i was crying cause knowing her story i know she was playing it with passion
using all her sadness to power her melody

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and me, his ex
i become a part of that melody
cuz i am a part of her suffering

hallow spear
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