“Trapped.”

[rocky siren]

This poem is about looking through old chat logs. Same as other poems, comments appreciated, but not needed.

[gilded wharf]

Woah the line delivery in this poem is really strong, I like how the lines follow the same structure but change just slightly to convey the feeling better

[rocky siren]

Hey thanks! I’m late because I turned off all my notifs for discord. Glad you like it. It’s sort of funny, I make these poems for my own coping but it still brings enjoyment to people. Like a sad song.

I really played around with imagery this time, not actually dropping that it’s based off chat logs

[gilded wharf]

I can tell, the imagery is rlly good!

[rocky siren]

I saw how we talked, and we loved each other. We talked through a couple different things like messenger and snap, and i deleted the messenger threads, so I am able to spare myself reading about the downfall of us. So when I look at snap, our days of I love yous just… cease.

I still remember why we split. It was mainly communication, but a bit more than that. It was long distance, and while with me, she started catching feelings for someone else. I think this was partially due to our lack of physical relationship due to distance.

[unborn turret]

Wonderful! @rocky siren has just pregressed to level 2!

[naive prism]

This is really good