Dig in. I’ll let you touch.
Pass your fingers
through my liver.
Eat me. No need to rush.
Consume me like a fever.
What does my brain taste like?
Here tastes of candy,
there it’s bitter,
deeper inside.
That part’s so small,
but it still fits her.
She leaks everywhere.
She leaks everywhere.
She leaks everywhere.
#have a taste of my words
mental oxide
@pliant grove
@midnight idol
pliant grove
I love it!
midnight idol
this is good yeah
mental oxide
why thank you 🙏
mental oxide
thank you 🙏
midnight idol
it's skirting the line between perverse and childish um
clearly sensual stuff, olfactory taste etc.
but the end is clearly not about anything sexual
or i mean it is but it isnt
pale cobalt
I’m traumatised
mental oxide
I’m traumatised
is that good or bad
mental oxide
but the end is clearly not about anything sexual
oh, that's for sure a valid interpretation, though it hadn't really struck my mind at first
welp, I guess she does leak everywhere doesn't she
mental oxide
quite a raw view into it, I like it
midnight idol
reminds me of a certain part of joyce, ulysses, when the protagnist is enjoying eating kidneys
in the book, it is used as a way of offering the reader a view into his psychology and eroticism --- i stole this from AI but its a neat explanation
there's something almost confrontational about your word choices
mental oxide
@pale cobalt @limber crystal @stray nebula ended up writing something today
mental oxide
there's something almost confrontational about your word choices
I'm glad this comes through!
midnight idol
yeah definitely
mental oxide
it's certainly confrontational. mainly because every single thing I write ends up being about a single specific person, even when it isn't
a parasitical muse
midnight idol
character study?
small sparrowBOT
character study?
Wonderful! @midnight idol has just pregressed to level 10!
mental oxide
you could say so
midnight idol
when i write i have this annoying habit of orienting the camera, if you will, on myself
mental oxide
"she leaks" into everything I write
midnight idol
an influence then yeah. something in your veins that you will never lose
radiant capeBOT
midnight idol
almost like a drug
mental oxide
when i write i have this annoying habit of orienting the camera, if you will, on...
how so? have you posted something yet? I'd love to read it
midnight idol
i have written something, i'm not perfectly happy with it
it came out like vomit
i don't know where to post it
mental oxide
my DMs are open if you feel like it
even when a poem looks "pretty", is well versed, etc., that's just makeup
the raw feeling is what matters, and there's no way to mask any of if
midnight idol
i think it's rather simple on the face of it
i mean my influences are rap
which is a very ego mode
stray nebula
Visceral. Great work!
It also makes me feel uneasy. But in a good way. There is something subtly terrifying about this one.