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[past sedge]

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[tall dagger]

@toxic elk

[toxic elk]

I was summoned. Loyalty doesn't change course, perhaps something else? Attention?

[tall dagger]

🤔

[toxic elk]

That's a personal opinion on loyalty, not the poem. The poem is enjoyable but sad.

[ancient storm]

Perfect...

[tall dagger]

Loyalty in its truest form, does not shift as easily as attention does. it’s the impermanence of human focus & connection that I sought to capture.
The fleeting nature of attention mirrors the way we sometimes wander from our deeper commitments, only to return to them later.
I appreciate your perspective & I am grateful that you enjoyed reading it despite its inherent sadness.

[toxic elk]

Things don't have to be happy to be beautiful. You are a really good writer.

[hard cedar]

Time carved defeat on a face like mine;
I was a silence thriving in conversation.
Yet each word handed me a fresh longing. 🔥

[bleak girder]

Ahem, I'm a fan
For me, this really relates to times when the watches betray our expectations, being stuck in the same stubborn trunk, believing that the tree will grow, but it dosent, and now everybody knows
I truly am in awe of how every word counts, truly, I have soo much to learn from you.
I do hope you will not be surprised when I use your poems for some of mine lol (pf course with the proper credit and permission).
I truly loved it

[tall dagger]

Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed reading it 😊

[grim yoke]

it's beautifully heartbreaking... I love it, paints a vivid picture in my mind.

[worn glade]

Gorgeous

truly gorgeous

you really have a way with words

<3

[tall dagger]

Thank you so much 😊

[arctic compass]

The first stanza really speaks to me

[native garden]

Ooo great poem bard! I love that!!

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