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neat depot
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This is so good fr!!!! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
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cold galleon
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It's beautiful, the glances, silence it's all conveyed well.
It's like the poem shows a meaning to stealing glances,the silence between two hearts as they speak language of love through eyes and the spark between them?
(I'm sleepy rn but that's what I can interpret, it's messy but okay)
I loveee it, yor poems are short yet really well written and amazing.
Thankyou for sharing coffeepotat

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frank bough
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I really liked this! "a place where words are afraid to go" really struck me as a powerful line.

turbid pulsar
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The first line catches my attention because of how relatable it sounds! The narrative displays yours emotions very well! Thanks for sharing your poem! SaberSaysPretty

civic skiff
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I have gotten straight A’s
for measuring the distance between stars,
but what about the space between our hearts ? that's some nice wordplay

gentle quiver
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Oh wow I absolutely love this one, this is truly great, I love it

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ruby whale
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Scientist by twice :>>> i dunno first lines made me think of that

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thorny sail
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I’m glad you enjoyed reading it

scarlet wagon
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I find the tone too direct when discussing such an intimate and abstract concept.