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[naive sleet]

@blissful osprey has sent a notification! - @hot tiger @candid wigeon

[karmic bolt]

-,- I had almost ignored this

This is really good

[ashen river]

Hi, I'll get to this when I can. As a friendly reminder please try to limit how many poems you want me to look at, I like to take my time and energy with each poem I'm given to really dig deep into the work. If somebody puts on more to my plate; it'll discourage me from interactions with said somebody, especially if I've mentioned the boundary before and it's crossed.

[blissful osprey]

In my defence it was a short piece 😅, but from now on I’ll not tag you in any of my pieces. I honestly don’t keep track of how often I tag someone. I only tag people I’ve interacted with before & have provided feedback. I thought this would align with that, but I get your perspective too.
I really do value the insights—
Thank you.

[ashen river]

It may be short but I'll no joke spend waaaaaaaaay too much time on it maybe, (my fault for not previewing the piece, but I feel everything is more than it actually is, lol.) And I get your perspective! I'd like to have a less demanding existence here, we could balance it out by having me @ you in my poems, but I'd like to reserve energy and time for my more formal and thorough pieces maybe. If you're willing to collaborate with me on that I'd be more than happy to return the labor.

Again sorry sorrryyyy ,

[blissful osprey]

You can tag me that’s not the issue lol but the thing is I’ll not be able to track when to @ you 😅

[ashen river]

For me, I keep tabs on everything I need to do for others and what they've done for me, it helps in general organization. For me, hm.., it may be best to not tag me as often, you could maybe ask me when i'm in #💬・off-topic or #📜・poetry-discussion .

Also, what am I doing for you? (/nm, /genq) I feel you're good and I have no way of actually helping you lol,

I've burned out a lot from this server because people always ask me to read their poem, and I'd do it knowing it'll exhaust me. So I'd like to prevent a relapse, 😅.

[blissful osprey]

Damn, 😅

[ashen river]

If you also want, we could set up a deal of sorts, @blissful osprey but we'd have to negotiate that at another time as I'm a little busy with what I've got go'n on rn, .

I'm open to whatever you may be open to! , !

[blissful osprey]

Sounds perfect 👍

[gusty sundial]

This is so beautiful

[uncut frigate]

This is really good! I love itt

[torn thicket]

Thank you

Perfect ♥️

[broken laurel]

Can you explain the title?

its a good poem but the title is a bit opaque to me

[blissful osprey]

Sure, it is a mathematical expression, where variable (L) represents Life, suggesting that Life is not an all-or-nothing concept. Instead, it resides in the infinitely delicate space between 0 & 1—
a state that is neither absolute nor void, but somewhere in between.
Cuz if you care to solve for this there are infinitely many solutions for this as with the life which you can’t quantify (like, personal experiences, emotions, longings etc)
Hence, 0 < L < 1.

[broken laurel]

Wow such an astounding and clever metaphor ty

[blissful osprey]

@trim dagger

[trim dagger]

Created: #💬・off-topic message

[fleet ibex]

https://tenor.com/view/furina-approves-gif-14393617851646262056

Thy has cooked and thy has served

[azure chasm]

Nice and simple. Consistent theme and imagery with some sound tying it together. Message is clear but lies in the showing of the story. Pleasantly done.