#Whispers of desire

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balmy island
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(The three human desires)

In the shadows where our secrets lie,
Three figures linger, as dreams pass us by.
Envy, a specter with emerald eyes,
Wears a mask of beauty, where longing lies.
She weaves her threads in the minds of men,
Turning joy to bitterness again and again.
“Why not me?” her haunting voice weaves,
As she cradles dreams like autumn leaves.

Lust, a flame with a flickering tongue,
Sings a siren’s song where the wild are young.
With a touch like fire, he tempts and he taunts,
In the depths of desire, his shadow flaunts.
He promises ecstasy, a fleeting embrace,
But leaves only ashes in his reckless chase.
The thrill fades fast; the heartache is raw,
A restless hunger that craves for more.

Greed, a glutton in a gilded cage,
Counts his treasures, yet feels no sage.
His fingers are stained with the gold he holds,
Yet his soul is barren, his heart grows cold.
“More,” he whispers, with a ravenous grin,
But the emptiness grows, where contentment should win.
He builds his towers, but they crumble and crack,
For the more he possesses, the less he looks back.

Together they weave, a tapestry gray,
Binding us tight in their merciless play.
Each whispered promise fades into despair,
As we drown in the weight of the burdens we bear.
Envy, Lust, Greed—heavy chains on our souls,
Shaping our lives into unfillable holes.
In the quietest moments, we grapple with strife,
Haunted by choices that carve through our life.

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@dark sable @limpid karma @heavy spade @autumn crescent

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@vagrant grotto

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@ruby cliff

vagrant grotto
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Well, there's a fourth.
It's what separates human from animals.

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Compassion.

balmy island
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I see

balmy island
crystal ferryBOT
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*I was highlighting

desires that lead us to

do horrible things*

balmy island
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But I can try making one that highlights the complete opposite of these which would be compassion and other positive things

ruby cliff
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Desires! lol. It's a cool poem, just that it kinda hurts because the last one is the most of me. It happens I guess

ruby cliff
balmy island
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I know

autumn crescent
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Interesting Allusions and references! Good choice of diction to describe these desires! It was a good read~ thanks for sharing!❤️

limpid karma
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DAMN TAHTS GOOD

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I imagined this as three souls who are being kept in hades for their crimes of envy, lust and greed. I also LOVE any comparison with “weaving” so this was very very nice to read! In fact I think this might be one of the best poems I have read from you.

dusky tendonBOT
balmy island
limpid karma
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Hope you win though!