Our Last Day of Summer

[gilded cradle]

i wrote this for my english class a little while back, this was the first poem i’ve ever written and wanted some feedback. this is also the first time i’ve ever looked into poetry as a whole and have found myself falling in love with the writing style. i am not much of a writer so please be easy on me 😅.

[hollow drum]

@mossy birch is now following @gilded cradle.

[verbal hedge]

This is really good! I love how it flows and how I can feel myself in the POV

[mossy birch]

This is really good. Easy to read, emotionally impactful, expect it had a longterm impact too.

[verbal hedge]

It feels like something I’d read at the end of a reallyyy good novel, then look back on and feel like it was well complete

[gilded cradle]

thank you so much! this is the first time i’ve been interested in poetry and tried to make one of my own

[gilded cradle]

this makes me feel great lol

[verbal hedge]

Ping me if you post anything else here, I’d love to see more of your writing (: